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Discussion.
Thinking of reverting the changes on this article. Current version has a lot of run on sentances, and cuts the bio down to almost nothing. Easier to revert than it is to rewrite. While it's nice to have concise writting it shouldn't be done at the cost of details that flush out a very minor character for which not much is written. Things like the tyranid invasion provide a useful backdrop and give a frame of reference for a character who exact dates are not given. Also the exarch listed at the end of the original article is named in 3rd edition, but unamed in 4th ed. This provides a level of ambiguity that GW seems to love in their fiction, but still spells out pretty clearly that the Exarch is Althenian, there aren't actually that many exarch's running around. Anyways just giving a heads up so we can write a better article, avoid constant back and forth editing on the article, and let folks weigh in in case I'm being overly sentimental about my own writing ;). --[[User:Anntar2]] 10:50, 23 June 2010 (GMT)
