Talk:Anatolus Gdolkin

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The paragraph "=== The Final Battle for Medusa === After the [[warp storm]] [[Araken]] incident, [[Venerable Dreadnought]] [[Talumech]] fell in the defence of [[Medusa]] against the [[Thirteenth Black Crusade]] and his [[Dreadnought]] body was given to Gdolkin after his victory against the [[Chaos]] enemies on [[Crucible]]. During the campaign [[Magos]] [[Thule]] shot Gdolkin in the chest with a [[plasma gun]], destroying his original heart. Later Gdolkin's augmentic left leg and augmentic right eye were damaged in battle with a [[Word Bearer]], leaving his eye blind. His augmentic right arm and servo arm were both removed as well. His body then being to broken to serve him after the Crucible mission had been interred into the immortal [[Dreadnought]] body once belonging to [[Talumech]]. Thus fulling his dream and ambition to serve the [[Emperor]] in a immortal [[Dreadnought]] body." is completely unclear as to what happened when and on which planet, i.e. the temporal sequence of events on Crucible and Medusa is confusing and needs to be corrected. --Inquisitor S., Großmeister des Ordo Lexicanum (talk) 05:03, 14 April 2019 (MDT)