User talk:Nurgleswrath

Welcome

First and foremost, thank you for your contributions, second, I think you should check Zahariel‎ and Cabal and correct the notified errors, while your entry seem fulfilling enough, they are just basic text, and Lexicanum is a wiki, not notepad. :) Try to add paragraphs using the headline button, sources, internal link to relevant words, categories and whatnot. If you don't know how to do it, ask me and I'll try to help. --Madness 06:56, 24 May 2008 (CEST)

Ok it took me some time to fix them as I never read the novel, please check Zahariel‎, Cabal and The Order. Notice how the war between the order and the Knights of the Lupus belongs to The Order and not Zahariel‎, who merely took part in it. At least that's what I know about it, I didn't read the novel, feel free to expand.--Madness 13:21, 24 May 2008 (CEST)

Lookin' good, now try not to expand too much about the orders war in the Zahariel‎, and keep the in-depth informations in The Order page. Again, the articles are REALLY improving. :)

About the Cabal page, is there any information on what were those IG and Alpha Legion ships were doing when they met the cabal? Or meeting the cabal ship was the intended mission? In short, how and when did that all happen?

We also need some information about Peto Bronzi (speaking of which, both "peto" and "bronzi" are synonimous of "fart" in italian, very weird.). Nothing too deep, Soneka->IG captain, Shere->Sanctioned psyker (I guess), Peto Bronzi->?. Also check if Soneka is an Imperial Guard member or an Imperial Navy, 'cause since we're talking of ships, it might be the latter. --Madness 15:43, 25 May 2008 (CEST)