User talk:Ashnaki

Welcome to Warhammer 40k - Lexicanum! We hope you will contribute much and well. You will probably want to read the Help section. Again, welcome and have fun! Inquisitor S., Großmeister des Ordo Lexicanum (talk) 07:13, 2 May 2024 (UTC)

Proposal

Since you asked on discord, i tweaked your text a bit :

Akron Neos is a Lieutenant in the Silver Templars' 4th Company. He was the son of a minor lord on Novaris. While it seemed unlikely he would survive the Space Marine initiation, his strenght of will and proficency with weapons allowed him to thrive. When Lieutenant Omnas fell under the blade of a Lord of Contagion on Iax, Neos got promoted to Lieutenant. He decapitated the Champion who had killed Omnas, and held the line until the arrival of the Libators.^[1]

His relic blade, Fulminata, was offered to the chapter by Marneus Calgar.^[1]

--Siegfriedfr (talk) 13:19, 4 May 2024 (UTC)